Your personal opinion?...?

[Greg D homie]

well i write poems and stuff.... and i was wondering if you guys could check them out on my myspace....i am submitting one of them to this poetry website and i dont know which one of 2 i want to use.....

here is the link....

myspace.com/xskaterxinxlovex

i am trying to deicde between my poem metaphors of love and my poem into the mirror...please help me...leave a comment or something.. but please give me your personal opinion...thanks...
well here are the two poems..

Into the mirror:

In the mirror,
what do you see?
a person of truth,
or a person thats free?

In the mirror,
whats your reflection?
a man of sorrow,
or a man or affection?

In the mirror,
whats your belief?
its better to told of honesty,
or to be told lies of relief?

In the mirror,
ever since you were poor,
you were a confused little boy,
but now you are something more.

AND THIS IS METAPHORS OF LOVE:

Metaphors of Love:

like a gentle sway of the wind,
you came into my life,
at the blink of an eye.

like a pheonix emerging from the ashes,
my eyes had never seen such beauty before,
just like love at first sight.

just like a graceful angel descending down upon me,
i kept falling deeper and deeper,
into the immense hole in your heart.

like a rotting corpse from the decaying soil,
you will never be dead to me,
your beauty inside and out will always exist.

[onefinefeller]

Sucks. No talent whatsoever.

[Luna]

im sure they'll be great

[Holly M]

I'm sure they are great but your profile is set to private! So we need to add you first! How about you just copy and paste them into this question?

[Young Uncle]

Well, I guess you are still a long way from "Flanders Fields". But it is a try and to that to you my hat I fly...