Could you have a look at lyrics I've written and give me your opinions?

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i'm writing a song for my friends who i won't be able to see again. I really want to get the message across, so please tell me what you think.

Did I mention I hated this place
Now I always come here by myself
Coz it reminds me of the good old days
How could I forget those jokes

in the blue smoke we pulled a stroke
Now I remember clearly

Did you tell me that you were down
Now I realise what you really meant
Coz I was somebody to give you a hand
How could I have not helped you

in the closed room you were in gloom
Now I remember clearly

my dear friends, can we go back
once again to those days
let's get back, let's get back,
let's get back, I say it loud
Can you hear me singin' in a sad key
I drop the knee and wish you were here

Did we laugh till we all cried
Now I only smile at the photos
Coz that was the best time of my life
How could I ever go beyond that

in my mind, I'm left behind
But I remember clearly

my dear friends can we go back
once again to those days
let's get back, let's get back
let's get back, I say it loud

I'm singing about you in the corner of this dump
all my memories have been fading away
So I need to leave them here before I forget
in the tunes that I'd never favour again