What is your honest opinion of this poem I wrote?

[RS]

It's called "Dreams Are For Lovers"

We lay in the grass intertwined,
our hands tightly clasped together,
as we gaze at the midsummer’s day sky.
I watch the clouds, and somehow I see
hearts, rose petals and chocolates.
I’m on cloud nine.

I close my eyes and
dream of a day
with my love;
we’d fly like doves
to a cloud…
high above.

We could play tag
like little kids on a playground.
Get lost,
while we stare into each other’s eyes.
Lay together,
and dream.

But clouds aren’t for dreams and tag.
He was mine, and I was his,
and we would fall together…
right back onto the grass,
lying intertwined,
our hands clasped tightly together.