Opinions on my poem please... it's about the hold society has on young women...?

[FoxyMama]

Conform,
They say.
The infamous they...
Buy our perfume. Buy our clothing. Buy our gel and hairspray.
Primp,
They say,
Til’ you look like a doll.
Til’ you look nothing like you, nothing like you at all.
Look,
They say,
The infamous they.
In the mirror… don’t you see you? You look pretty today.
Be,
They say,
What society deems.
Disregard your own feelings. Disregard your own dreams.
Conform,
They say,
The infamous they…
Make us love you tomorrow.
We’ll tolerate you today.

What do you think? What would be a good title for this?

[I miss my friend Nick]

I really love this!

[texas tornado]

"Accept Me for Me" or something like "Todays Woman" as a good title.

Kind of a throw back to the beatnik days. I like that.

[TD Euwaite™]

She's lost her dollar in the pop machine...

[JesusFreak]

Awesome!! 10/10
Call it, "The Infamous They..."

[aning]

this would come out as a great song,rock tunes, can be sang by the band paramour