What do you think of these lyrics? I wrote them myself..I dont no if theyre good

[GNR!!!]

tho can u give me ur opinion? i give u a glance
u give me a glance
we look in2 each others eyes
and i hope 4 this moment to last 4ever
but then u look back
and my hopes go down
but at least u no i exist
i'd give anything 4 u 2 talk 2 me

but i'm no 1 compared 2 u
we r so different
no matter what i'll always love u
i try 2 get close
u move away
i try 2 talk but im too scared
why cant u talk 2 me

id give anything 4 u 2 no my name
no my name
no my name
no my name
i c u running through the park
on my way home
cant u speak 2 me
u talk 2 everyone else

but ur so popular
who am i 4 u 2 talk 2
im just another girl who is in love w/ u
do i even have a chance
when u could have whoever u choose

i sit here in my room
wishing u knew my name
and writing this pointless song
how i wish u talked 2 me
how i wish u knew my name

i cant stop thinking, dreaming of u
so as i rite this song
im thinking of tommorrow
when i can finally c ur face again...

[?HOpIn4A2008BabY?]

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