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[Vlad]

Honesty 1st!

CATCHING A WAVE

Dude,
You gonna surf with me tomorrow?
I heard the waves are so rad,
And the current is strong,
Dude,
You wanna go to the Jax peer?
Where the waters are crowded,
Or do you wanna go somewhere where,
We can kick it, and chill, surfing without care.
Watching the lighning bust the sky
At a distance,
And hearing the thunder roll in.
The waves are breaking far,
And Dean is pushing so strong, bro,
You wanna catch the wave,
And feel that you are riding on the top of the world?
Without worrying dude,
Just chilling and forget it all.
You know all that trash you keep in
From day to day?
How your old man told you
You’re not worth a penny.
Let it go, dude,
And hook up with some peace,
Surf with me,
And we will do life together.
We will come to the
Father,
Who alone can heal the
Wounds that have scarred our
Life.
Dude, you wanna drop it
Kick back and let it go?
Catch a legit wave,
And ride it down the rushing white waters,
It's a surfer poem
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