do you like this anime drawing?

[Kairi]

http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p122/Kairi_San1/CCF03022008_00002.jpg
i made this drawing and i was wondering if you like it, so please rate it from 1-10
btw im sorry i know that the feet arent finished its becuz i didnt have space on the real paper
what should i fix if you could plz enlighten me?
please rate this one too.
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p122/Kairi_San1/CCF03022008_00000.jpg
mylittle: thanks, lol i know the scythes name, you see at first she was gona be a witch so ya i was gonna name the broom that then it turned into a scythe so ya i forgot to erase that lol sorry, ignore that part
Satan Tofu: jeez lady im working on it!! you dont have to be so cold!!! im figuring out on my own with no help k? its kinda hard!
grady: thank you, although i know there not the best drawings in the world but atleast i tried...right?
DarthRai- thnak you for the comments and stuff i cant really make them all moving and stuff yet so i know they look flat en everything.... also i cant really fix the first one, its done in pen.....
Ryuu: i dont really understand your comment but um thanks for the 8 >.<
chappy teh rabbit: *cries* such kind words...., thank you though, i usually dont care what people say but i really need opinions, *sigh* i wish there was some kind of manga school or something that would help a great lot.....*sigh*
s2jazzy: thanks, you sure make me want to continue to draw. (im being sarcastic since you cant hear me say this)
Deidara ????: i dont really like to make characters fat, its just a habbit but thanks for rating >.<