A Weather Haiku: Care to Comment?

King of Biscuits · #1 (**permalink**) 04-29-2008, 04:11 PM

The gloom of today
As the rain hits my face
The Earth showers me
I'm off today........

Alobar · #2 (**permalink**) 04-29-2008, 04:16 PM

The clouds oppress, the rain cleanses--I too enjoy the rain.

neonman · #3 (**permalink**) 04-29-2008, 04:18 PM

A 565'r on the weather scale?

Many are raindrops
Falling always on my head
Umbrella anyone?

Elaine P · #4 (**permalink**) 04-29-2008, 04:21 PM

Rain refreshes Earth
Soaks the parched and thirsty soil
A blessing from God.

Mr. Bugsme · #5 (**permalink**) 04-29-2008, 04:22 PM

I thought it sucked
When I read it
And I was right.

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